This is a final project for my Drawing for Motion class. It still isn't due for another 3 or 4 weeks, but with buying a house and moving before finals, I'm just trying to get everything done early. So, go ahead a rip it apart or leave me nice little "good job"s or whatever.
the hunch-back frame is off. a cheetah will swing its back legs full in front of its front, and plant them, almost in a sitting position.
You've got the hind legs far too far back for that frame
the rest looks pretty good. the tail could use some more movement.
Whoa. You went a digging way back! I did this probably almost two years ago. However, I do concur with everything you said, though I was trying to push things and bend that damn cat a little!
The cheetah design is wonderful! However, is it animated on twos? It seems a little choppy.. If it is, I'd do a tween between each frame and shoot it on ones.. If you can't do that, then yeah, I'd give him more air time, perhaps TWO frames more.. It really makes a difference because you have slightly varied timing which is more appealing to the eye.. In my opinion anyways.. ^_- It looks great though, man!
You've got the hind legs far too far back for that frame
the rest looks pretty good. the tail could use some more movement.
I suppose I should look at your new stuff, huh?
yea, I can see that. good work.